Elliott 6 march

One day at the weekend I went out to get some lunch.
On the way, we drove past a sign but I took no notice of it and just drove past.
Though I  didn't read it,  it said 'beware penguin crossing coming up in 200 km'.
So when 200 km came up I didn't see the penguin crossing the road so the next thing I know is that I hit something.  I jumped out of the car to see what happened.
Then when I got out of the car I saw a little penguin that was lying on the floor and hurt.

Comments

  1. This is awesome Ellie, I had no idea that your sentence structure had improved so much. So good to see you using your punctuation correctly, at least until the last sentence. Keep up the good work, I'm very proud of you.

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  2. From Madison: I like how you use animals in your story Elliott, it is very good.

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  3. It made me wonder what happened next?

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  4. What a cool story Elliot. Poor penguin. I can’t wait to hear of it survived?

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  5. I liked how you used active words and nouns it's an awesome story Elliott! From Oliver Allen

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  6. Hi Elliot
    I enjoyed your 100WC, even if it had a sad ending. I think it would be very easy to miss a sign such as the one you missed, especially if you are busy driving. Great work.
    Mrs P (Team 100WC)
    Wellington, New Zealand

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